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[[Early Work] Match]

Whoa!

That's one big ass match!

[Imminent Appocalipse]

Nice animation!

I'm only reviewing this to get Mightywonder's review off of the front page! I THINK DINGLEBERRY CLOCK IS HOT TOO!

["Legacy Of Koizumo"]

HAHAA! THE BOOBS!

Okay, props for trying to make the boobs look bouncy. Unfortunately, it doesn't really work all that well. Here's a tip: Boobs usually bounce because the body they're attached to is bounching. When she's running on the roof, the only things moving are her legs and her boobs. Her body has to move up and down if her boobs are going to bounce.

Visit this link:

http://www.brianlemay.c om/animationexamples/jump1.htm l

It will take you to an animation sample page that illustrates what I'm talking about. Watch the bear's head, and how it bounces differently than his body. If that bear's head was two boobs, it would be right on the money.

The other samples on that website are actually pretty cool for basic examples of animation techniques... anyone who's a beginning animator should check them out.

Also, the guy in your movie that got hit in the forehead with the sai... he didn't even blink! I know that if I got stabbed in the forehead with a sai, I would at least roll my eyes and hang my tongue out of my mouth before I died. But he just sort of bled and fell straight down, like he didn't mind being killed at all.

Anyway, for your second movie that was pretty cool. Keep animating!

Dwarfking responds:

Lol, I know I know. I just wanted to have as many breasts bouncing as possible, coz then the horny nerds would like it, heh. And, yes, I know it wasn't all too realistic, I just wanted to release something ASAP.

[Gameboys for All]

Fantastic!

That was fucking FANTASTIC! I MEAN IT FOR REAL! You really ARE the future president of Nintendo!

[Nintendo made cooler]

Lame!

That was NOT made better! There's nothing better than the original Legend of Zelda jingle and you CUT THAT PART OUT!!!

[LiquidMist]

Nice movie!

The expressions on your character were just right, and the animation ws very fluid. Also, congratulations on making your own music for the cartoon! I can take or leave techno (and I leave most of it) and I didn't really groove on your songs themselves, but I give you mad props for doing it yourself.

One more thing, though... why is the filesize so big? Yu should try compressing the audio before submitting the movie.

And as for "HardJudge" who left the last review... if you check out his reviews on other movies, it shouldn't make you feel so bad. He's just an angry kid with a penis obsession. Kind of funny, though... he calls himself "HardJUDGE," but he's not really judging anything, he's just insulting people's cartoons. Maybe if he tried making one himself, he'd have an appreciation for all the effort that goes into one.

[Overprotective]

Nice work!

You did a fantastic job animating the mouth positions fot the lip synch. There were other times in the movie where the full action was drawn with the same painstaking care. Overall very nicely done... I'd like to see more.

My only complaint is the use of that Prodigy song. That song has been in more stick-death cartoons on Newgrounds than I care to remember. I used to like that song, but now when I hear it all I see are stick figures killing each other.

[Around the world]

I LIKE YOUR MOVIE

It's a big loop! It's like it goes "around the world" hahahaa! Get it?

[Jesus Freaks]

BROKEN LOADER

I can't get past your pre-loader. I think it's broken! Maybe.

[The Walmart God]

Very nicely done.

Although not as good as your Vampire Hunter series, it's still a very decent cartoon. You guys rock.

My only complaint is that you credited Dr. Demento with the song "Shaving Cream," but it was done by Benny Bell.